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but add some sound, dialog, and diferent backrounds. otherwise very good
Author's Response:
I'm not editing this after making it 3 years ago haha
I couldn't find sounds at the time nor any other good backgrounds. Not many good sources were around as they are today
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hate the flash. its very poorly made. you need to fine tune the speech especialy becuase his moth kept opening and closing for a while after he stopped talking.
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work on it. not much else i can say. sorry.
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"only 1 thing could have made it beter"
mix another phraze nappa says the "what? nine thousand?!" in with is to make it even more randomly hilarios ^^
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i find it so enoying when you crash into somthing and you fly out the windsheild. and it was hilarios when he landed like 5 notical miles away from the coast =3
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i wonder who let weeble and bob into the enrichment center? or how they even got the portal gun. hilarios with the speed falling portal though =3
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it wasent very good im sorry to say. the animations were a lil jagged. try cleaning them up. and add some backround music like a realy comercial. and add a fast speaking narator to go along with the words. that will make it alot beter. keep trying though and add that sound!
and i doubt this will stay sorry bub. youll have to save it to a flash drive.
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Please help me with the sound!!
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that was freaking awsome. especialy with obi saying his unltamite quote. great song by the way
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well since it was a beta and its in its first stage of development. its understandable it have screw ups: needs a key button lay out, little bubles to show dmg or "miss" in battle. and for a novice ninja that guy seemed pretty kick ass. a novie shood be about the same lvl if not lower than your char at start then you progress to more experienced fighters, needs more stuff to do than just traning dojo, and improve the animations a bit.
the good stuff were: the movment of you charakter was simple and easy to get, and the shops, house, dojo were fairly easy to know what to do in
plus the overal job on the art was very good.
keep workin at it and this may become a great RPG
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a save system is all it needs. unless i missed it or it auyto saves since i inly played one session otherwise great game ^^
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