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but add some sound, dialog, and diferent backrounds. otherwise very good
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I'm not editing this after making it 3 years ago haha
I couldn't find sounds at the time nor any other good backgrounds. Not many good sources were around as they are today
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it wasent very good im sorry to say. the animations were a lil jagged. try cleaning them up. and add some backround music like a realy comercial. and add a fast speaking narator to go along with the words. that will make it alot beter. keep trying though and add that sound!
and i doubt this will stay sorry bub. youll have to save it to a flash drive.
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Please help me with the sound!!
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one of the beter gallarys id recomend that u add some music though and add a few vid clips im looking forawrd to the next one
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Next one is already out =O
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but add some blood and a few more scenes or music
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will do, ta 4 teh review!
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and realy well mad ecant wait to see it but lol u totaly stole the guy in the green suit from half-life =P
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thats the point -.- it's gman
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this is deep creepy and so varry true humans are ruining the planet: deforestation, water and air polution ect. and eventualy being in a box of troubles wont be our only problum...
great sound track by the way and very nice use of the old movie screen effect
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Thanks.
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no plot or sound and try adding some speech bubbles at least and definetly a preloader
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I can't add a preloader because I use another program (anime studio) and the NG preloaders do not work with that...
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no plot, random stuff hapens(not always a bad thing), at the rychu part hes just standing there with a pokeball(wtf?) and the pics wernt varry good
only good thing was that sound track
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kinda funny but use beter picks and add some music
Author's Response:
Yeah, well, you see, The narration WAS practically music, and I only used 2 pics and traced them! but I'll abuse your advice carefully. Thank You!
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not random per say but a lil short could use work
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Of course its random. :D
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